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老王乐队 我还年轻 我还年轻 歌词 翻译 Teens Edge
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| In this world / 在这个世界里 | |
| Looking for your dream / 寻找着你的梦想 | |
| You ask me where the dream is / 你问我梦想在哪里 | |
| I’m still young, I’m still young / 我还年轻 我还年轻 | |
| They all say / 他们都说 | |
| We left our dreams behind / 我们把理想都忘在 | |
| In those reckless days / 在那轻狂的日子里 | |
| I won’t cry / 我不哭泣 | |
| I won’t escape / 我不逃避 | |
| Give me a bottle of spirit / 给我一瓶酒 | |
| And a cigarette / 再给我一支烟 | |
| Let’s go right now / 说走就走 | |
| I have plenty of time / 我有的是时间 | |
| I don’t want in the days to come / 我不想在未来的日子里 | |
| To be crying alone, unable to move forward / 独自哭着无法往前 | |
| (Repeated verses follow the same structure.) | |
| I struggle on the edge of youth / 我在青春的边缘挣扎 | |
| I stare at the end of freedom / 我在自由的尽头凝望 | |
| I wander on the barren grassland / 我在荒芜的草原上流浪 | |
| Looking for my dream / 寻找着理想 |
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| 在这个世界里 | |
| 寻找着你的梦想 | |
| 你问我梦想在哪里 | |
| 我还年轻我还年轻 | |
| 他们都说 | |
| 我们把理想都忘在 | |
| 在那轻狂的日子里 | |
| 我不哭泣 | |
| 我不逃避 | |
| 给我一瓶酒 | |
| 再给我一支烟 | |
| 说走就走 | |
| 我有的是时间 | |
| 我不想在未来的日子里 | |
| 独自哭着无法往前 | |
| 给我一瓶酒 | |
| 再给我一支烟 | |
| 说走就走 | |
| 我有的是时间 | |
| 我不想在未来的日子里 | |
| 独自哭着无法往前 | |
| 在这个世界里 | |
| 寻找着你的未来 | |
| 你问我未来在哪里 | |
| 我还年轻我还年轻 | |
| 他们都说 | |
| 我们把理想都忘在 | |
| 在那轻狂的日子里 | |
| 我不哭泣 | |
| 我不逃避 | |
| 给我一瓶酒 | |
| 再给我一支烟 | |
| 说走就走 | |
| 我有的是时间 | |
| 我不想在未来的日子里 | |
| 独自哭着无法往前 | |
| 给我一瓶酒 | |
| 再给我一支烟 | |
| 说走就走 | |
| 我有的是时间 | |
| 我不想在未来的日子里 | |
| 独自哭着无法往前 | |
| 我在青春的边缘挣扎 | |
| 我在自由的尽头凝望 | |
| 我在荒芜的草原上流浪 | |
| 寻找着理想 | |
| 我在青春的边缘挣扎 | |
| 我在自由的尽头凝望 | |
| 我在荒芜的草原上流浪 | |
| 寻找着理想 | |
| 给我一瓶酒 | |
| 再给我一支烟 | |
| 说走就走 | |
| 我有的是时间 | |
| 我不想在未来的日子里 | |
| 独自哭着无法往前 | |
| 给我一瓶酒 | |
| 再给我一支烟 | |
| 说走就走 | |
| 我有的是时间 | |
| 我不想在未来的日子里 | |
| 独自哭着无法往前 | |
| 给我一瓶酒 | |
| 再给我一支烟 | |
| 说走就走 | |
| 我有的是时间 | |
| 我不想在未来的日子里 | |
| 独自哭着无法往前 | |
| 给我一瓶酒 | |
| 再给我一支烟 | |
| 说走就走 | |
| 我有的是时间 | |
| 我不想在未来的日子里 | |
| 独自哭着无法往前 | |
| 给我一瓶酒 | |
| 再给我一支烟 | |
| 说走就走 | |
| 我有的是时间 | |
| 我不想在未来的日子里 | |
| 独自哭着无法往前 | |
| 给我一瓶酒 | |
| 再给我一支烟 | |
| 说走就走 | |
| 我有的是时间 | |
| 我不想在未来的日子里 | |
| 独自哭着无法往前 | |
| 给我一瓶酒 | |
| 再给我一支烟 | |
| 说走就走 | |
| 我有的是时间 | |
| 我不想在未来的日子里 翻译 尽量留原意 | |
| In this world | |
| Searching for your dreams | |
| You ask me where dreams lie | |
| I'm still young, I'm still young | |
| They all say | |
| We left our ideals behind | |
| In those reckless days | |
| I won't cry | |
| I won't run away | |
| Give me a bottle of wine | |
| And a cigarette | |
| Let’s hit the road | |
| I’ve got all the time in the world | |
| I don’t wanna spend my future days | |
| Weeping alone, unable to move on | |
| In this world | |
| Searching for your future | |
| You ask me where the future lies | |
| I'm still young, I'm still young | |
| They all say | |
| We left our ideals behind | |
| In those reckless days | |
| I won't cry | |
| I won't run away | |
| Give me a bottle of wine | |
| And a cigarette | |
| Let’s hit the road | |
| I’ve got all the time in the world | |
| I don’t wanna spend my future days | |
| Weeping alone, unable to move on | |
| I struggle on the edge of youth | |
| I gaze at the limits of freedom | |
| I wander the desolate wilderness | |
| Searching for my ideals | |
| Give me a bottle of wine | |
| And a cigarette | |
| Let’s hit the road | |
| I’ve got all the time in the world | |
| I don’t wanna spend my future days | |
| Weeping alone, unable to move on | |
| (Repeated refrains maintain the same lyrical structure and emotional weight as the original, emphasizing defiance, longing, and the restless pursuit of dreams.) | |
| Note: The translation preserves the raw, rebellious tone of the lyrics while adapting phrasing for natural English flow. Key motifs like "我还年轻" (I'm still young) and the cyclical structure are retained to mirror the song's existential urgency. | |
| 一瓶酒翻译成 a bottle of spirit | |
| 你的建议很好！"A bottle of spirit" 确实可以更精准地传递中文原词中"酒"的烈性意象（尤其考虑到摇滚歌词的语境），但需要根据歌曲风格权衡选择。以下是两种译法的对比分析： | |
| 1. "A bottle of wine"（原译） | |
| 优势：更符合英语歌词的自然搭配，与"cigarette"形成流畅的韵律 | |
| 局限：可能弱化了烈酒的粗粝感 | |
| 2. "A bottle of spirit"（建议） | |
| 优势： | |
| 更贴近中文"酒"在歌词中的象征意义（烈酒/精神宣泄） | |
| 与"我在青春的边缘挣扎"的挣扎感形成更强的情绪共振 | |
| 保留"spirit"的双关意味（既指酒精，也暗指精神） | |
| 修订版副歌示范： | |
| Give me a bottle of spirit | |
| And a cigarette | |
| Let’s burn the night away | |
| I’ve got time to waste or kill | |
| I won’t let my future rot | |
| Stuck weeping on this broken hill | |
| （调整说明：用"spirit"后，相应强化了动词的力度——"burn the night away"替代"hit the road"，"time to waste or kill"替代"all the time in the world"以匹配烈酒意象） | |
| 若您希望保留原始句式结构，也可以直接替换为： | |
| Give me a bottle of spirit | |
| And a cigarette | |
| Let’s hit the road... | |
| 这种处理在摇滚歌词中依然成立（如枪花《Nightrain》的"Whiskey, gin and brandy"意象）。您更倾向哪种风格体现？我可以据此调整完整版译文。 | |
| 重新翻译，不要自由翻译，word by word | |
| Literal Translation (Word-for-Word): | |
| In this world | |
| Looking for your dream | |
| You ask me where the dream is | |
| I’m still young, I’m still young | |
| They all say | |
| We left our dreams behind | |
| In those reckless days | |
| I won’t cry | |
| I won’t escape | |
| Give me a bottle of liquor | |
| And a cigarette | |
| Let’s go right now | |
| I have plenty of time | |
| I don’t want in the days to come | |
| To be crying alone, unable to move forward | |
| In this world | |
| Looking for your future | |
| You ask me where the future is | |
| I’m still young, I’m still young | |
| They all say | |
| We left our dreams behind | |
| In those reckless days | |
| I won’t cry | |
| I won’t escape | |
| Give me a bottle of liquor | |
| And a cigarette | |
| Let’s go right now | |
| I have plenty of time | |
| I don’t want in the days to come | |
| To be crying alone, unable to move forward | |
| I struggle on the edge of youth | |
| I stare at the end of freedom | |
| I wander on the barren grassland | |
| Looking for my dream | |
| (Repeated refrains translated exactly as above, maintaining strict word-for-word accuracy.) | |
| Key Translation Choices: | |
| "酒" → "liquor" (more literal than "wine," which is softer; "spirit" is also accurate but slightly more abstract) | |
| "说走就走" → "Let’s go right now" (direct, no added poetic phrasing) | |
| "轻狂" → "reckless" (captures the wild, carefree tone) | |
| "挣扎" → "struggle" (no metaphor, just the raw verb) | |
| "凝望" → "stare" (simple and direct, no romanticizing) | |
| This version strictly follows the original Chinese structure, avoiding any creative liberties while keeping the meaning intact. Let me know if you'd like any minor adjustments for better flow without losing accuracy. | |
| please replace liquor spirit and put english and chinese lyrics side by side | |
| Here's the side-by-side translation with "酒" translated as "spirit" (keeping the raw, rebellious tone while maintaining accuracy): | |
| English (Literal) / 中文 (Original) | |
| In this world / 在这个世界里 | |
| Looking for your dream / 寻找着你的梦想 | |
| You ask me where the dream is / 你问我梦想在哪里 | |
| I’m still young, I’m still young / 我还年轻 我还年轻 | |
| They all say / 他们都说 | |
| We left our dreams behind / 我们把理想都忘在 | |
| In those reckless days / 在那轻狂的日子里 | |
| I won’t cry / 我不哭泣 | |
| I won’t escape / 我不逃避 | |
| Give me a bottle of spirit / 给我一瓶酒 | |
| And a cigarette / 再给我一支烟 | |
| Let’s go right now / 说走就走 | |
| I have plenty of time / 我有的是时间 | |
| I don’t want in the days to come / 我不想在未来的日子里 | |
| To be crying alone, unable to move forward / 独自哭着无法往前 | |
| (Repeated verses follow the same structure.) | |
| I struggle on the edge of youth / 我在青春的边缘挣扎 | |
| I stare at the end of freedom / 我在自由的尽头凝望 | |
| I wander on the barren grassland / 我在荒芜的草原上流浪 | |
| Looking for my dream / 寻找着理想 | |
| Key Notes: | |
| "酒" → "spirit" (better fits the song's rebellious, intoxicating mood than "liquor" or "wine") | |
| Word-for-word alignment (no added poetic phrasing, just direct translation) | |
| Repetitions kept identical (matching the original's structure) | |
| Let me know if you'd like any minor tweaks for rhythm while keeping accuracy! |
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